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Integrating
Research into Fiction
Charlie never inherited a chocolate
factory. Mr. Darcy never fell for the charms of Elizabeth Bennett. Darth Vader
is not really Luke’s father. Fiction is, by definition, an untrue story. The
characters are imaginary. The plot is contrived. Nothing about it is real… or
is it? Some fiction writers like to introduce a little reality into their
novels. They include real people, places, events, and facts. However, this
practice is risky. Most fiction readers are not history buffs and do not have
scientific minds. An in-depth explanation of the properties of water or the
storming of the Bastille may turn the average reader off- even if you feel the
research is essential to the plot.
How can you tell the truth without angering fantasy-hungry readers?
In my work at Grammarly, I have read
articles that successfully incorporate real-world information and the boring
kind that I abandoned in the first few paragraphs. I made it my mission to see
how to do this right. Here are three pieces of advice based on my discoveries:
(1) Don’t wear
smarty-pants that do not fit! John Grisham writes incredible courtroom dramas
because he worked in the law profession. He knows his stuff! Readers crave his
insider’s view to legal processes that are normally out of range for them. So
ask yourself, if you could be a fly on the wall at your job or in a university
class, what would you be interested in seeing or discovering? If you had truth
serum, what questions would you ask historical figures? Share this intriguing
information with your readers. If it is not your area of expertise, find a
content area expert who can share something that readers want to know!
(2) "Dumb it down"
a little. Do you read medical journals for fun? Even if you do, most of your
readers do not. If Robin Cook’s medical thrillers include minute details of
diseases written in medical jargon, they would probably not be bestsellers.
Assume that your reader is not currently an expert in any field. Provide the
information that you want to share in a simple way. One popular strategy is to
weave it into the conversations that your characters have.
(3) Real means
real! If you are going to talk about Watergate, make sure you get the facts
straight. Double-check your facts using well-established sources. If you
mistakenly assert that President Hoover was impeached, you lose credibility
with the readers who know the truth. With the readers who are not history
savvy, you teach them lies that might later cause them to lose thousands on a
game show. Do not take this chance! Additionally, make sure your grammar and
spelling are impeccable. That impeached president’s name may sound like
“Nickson” but that is not how you spell it. If you run your work through an on line spellchecker, you will see a red squiggly line under
that particular proper noun.
Do the readers need to know? Upon further
consideration, have you noticed that the fly on the wall is asleep during your
university lecture on mega-hog farming? Leave the boring and non-essential
facts out of your fiction. If the information you want to share really is
spell-binding and essential to your plot, use the three tips above to make sure
it is worthy of your storytelling.
If you do the job well, your readers will
not be able to tell fact from fiction.
By NikolasBaron
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Bio:
Nikolas discovered his love for the written word in Elementary
School, where he started spending his afternoons sprawled across the living
room floor devouring one Marc Brown children’s novel after the other and
writing short stories about daring pirate adventures. After acquiring some experience
in various marketing, business development, and hiring roles at internet
startups in a few different countries, he decided to re-unite his professional
life with his childhood passions by joining Grammarly's marketing team in San
Francisco. He has the pleasure of being tasked with talking to writers,
bloggers, teachers, and others about how they use Grammarly online
proofreading application to improve their writing. His free time is spent
biking, traveling, and reading.
3 comments:
Very interesting! I like the part about being a fly on your wall at work - and also writing what you know from experience. Thanks!
Great blog! I've used Grammarly on quite a few occasions. Thanks.
Very sage advice!
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