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Friday, October 31, 2014

National Novel Writing Month

November might be Movember to some of you with facial hair, but to me, this year, it's National Novel Writing Month.
Take a look at NaNoWrMo.




Yup, we have our own crest. All I can say is that thank God coffee is on it!
Anyway, I've signed up and tomorrow, I start my novel. I have a very scattered, badly written synopsis done, and some character arcs, my faithful, Goal, Motivation and Conflict charts, plus Chris Vogler's The Writer's Journey,





and I will soldier forward first thing in the morning. My goal is 50,000 words. I'm going to chronicle my progress.

Good or bad.





So bookmark me and check back daily to see how (or if) I am writing today. And comment with encouragement or mockery. Your choice.



Monday, October 6, 2014

Bake, Love, Write and win prizes this Hallowe'en!


For those of you who like dealing with spooky, why not join us and do something cooky? (That's cook-y, not kook-y!) And at the same time, peek into our absolutely delicious treat we have for you!

Bake Love Write

From October 6th through the 23rd, over 30 authors are hosting a Halloween Scavenger Hunt. Participants visit each site to find a Halloween graphic.  Right here at my blog, I have hidden a spook-tack-u-lar Hallowe'en graphic, so start scrolling for it now. And the great part is that the more sites you visit, the more chances to win! There are over 60 prizes, and multiple winners each day! 



So, on October 6th, visit Sloan McBride's blog, where Sloan will give you get all the fun details, including links to the authors' pages, and a link to a sheet to type all the answers. It should be wicked fun! See you there!

Monday, September 29, 2014

A Little Riffling Fun

Riffle and I are having a bit of fun. And in order to share this fun, I have lowered the price of 


All For A Good Cause to 99 cents. 

Now Riffle is a bit like Goodreads and a bookstore with great prices. I like it better than Goodreads because it's easier to follow and write a review, check out recommended books and read honest reviews. And hopefully, you'll see All For A Good Cause there Oct 1st.

For those of you with Kobos and Nooks, I have the same price here:

Don't have a Kobo account? Don't worry, use 
Use coupon code: PK62D when you go to the checkout so you can get the same book for only 99 cents. This code expires Oct 5th, so don't delay.

Tuesday, September 2, 2014

Integrating Research into Fiction

As a writer of historical fiction, or, hey, a writer of any sort, I am especially interested in research. Here is an interesting article by Nikolas Baron from Grammarly, about research. He offers some tips on making your research come alive for your fiction story.
Barbara



Integrating Research into Fiction


Charlie never inherited a chocolate factory. Mr. Darcy never fell for the charms of Elizabeth Bennett. Darth Vader is not really Luke’s father. Fiction is, by definition, an untrue story. The characters are imaginary. The plot is contrived. Nothing about it is real… or is it? Some fiction writers like to introduce a little reality into their novels. They include real people, places, events, and facts. However, this practice is risky. Most fiction readers are not history buffs and do not have scientific minds. An in-depth explanation of the properties of water or the storming of the Bastille may turn the average reader off- even if you feel the research is essential to the plot. How can you tell the truth without angering fantasy-hungry readers? 




In my work at Grammarly, I have read articles that successfully incorporate real-world information and the boring kind that I abandoned in the first few paragraphs. I made it my mission to see how to do this right. Here are three pieces of advice based on my discoveries:


(1) Don’t wear smarty-pants that do not fit! John Grisham writes incredible courtroom dramas because he worked in the law profession. He knows his stuff! Readers crave his insider’s view to legal processes that are normally out of range for them. So ask yourself, if you could be a fly on the wall at your job or in a university class, what would you be interested in seeing or discovering? If you had truth serum, what questions would you ask historical figures? Share this intriguing information with your readers. If it is not your area of expertise, find a content area expert who can share something that readers want to know!


(2) "Dumb it down" a little. Do you read medical journals for fun? Even if you do, most of your readers do not. If Robin Cook’s medical thrillers include minute details of diseases written in medical jargon, they would probably not be bestsellers. Assume that your reader is not currently an expert in any field. Provide the information that you want to share in a simple way. One popular strategy is to weave it into the conversations that your characters have.


(3) Real means real! If you are going to talk about Watergate, make sure you get the facts straight. Double-check your facts using well-established sources. If you mistakenly assert that President Hoover was impeached, you lose credibility with the readers who know the truth. With the readers who are not history savvy, you teach them lies that might later cause them to lose thousands on a game show. Do not take this chance! Additionally, make sure your grammar and spelling are impeccable. That impeached president’s name may sound like “Nickson” but that is not how you spell it. If you run your work through an on line spellchecker, you will see a red squiggly line under that particular proper noun. 


Do the readers need to know? Upon further consideration, have you noticed that the fly on the wall is asleep during your university lecture on mega-hog farming? Leave the boring and non-essential facts out of your fiction. If the information you want to share really is spell-binding and essential to your plot, use the three tips above to make sure it is worthy of your storytelling. 

If you do the job well, your readers will not be able to tell fact from fiction.


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Bio:


Nikolas discovered his love for the written word in Elementary School, where he started spending his afternoons sprawled across the living room floor devouring one Marc Brown children’s novel after the other and writing short stories about daring pirate adventures. After acquiring some experience in various marketing, business development, and hiring roles at internet startups in a few different countries, he decided to re-unite his professional life with his childhood passions by joining Grammarly's marketing team in San Francisco. He has the pleasure of being tasked with talking to writers, bloggers, teachers, and others about how they use Grammarly online proofreading application to improve their writing. His free time is spent biking, traveling, and reading.


Tuesday, August 12, 2014

Protected by the Warrior

Allow me to do a little bragging!

Protected by the Warrior

And allow me to share this story with you!
 
FOR HONOR'S SAKE 
When Clara became a midwife, she vowed to preserve life above all. She'll keep that vow, even if it means defying a Norman baron by hiding a Saxon slave and her child. Yet when the ruthless lord threatens Clara's village—and her life—she's forced to rely on another Norman to keep her safe. 
Kenneth D'Entremont is a soldier, one who takes lives instead of healing them. Clara despairs of finding any common ground with him. But when he begins guarding her, she learns to see him in a new light. His care and compassion make her feel safe…even loved. Can she bring herself to put her secrets, and her heart, under the protection of the warrior?

Here is an excerpt from a humorous part in the story.  (Where Kenneth has slipped and fallen.)



Clara gasped. She could see the moon reflected in Kenneth’s eyes, wide between his swift blinks of stunned shock. She hurried over to him. “Are you all right?”

He groaned as he tested each limb and found them all working. “Aye. I’m not badly hurt. What was that thing?”

“A cat, I think. At night, they slip into the village from the keep to prowl.” Then, ensuring that he could see her intense expression as clearly as possible in the moonlight, she leaned close and planted her hands on either side of his shoulders. “Since you are unhurt, allow me to continue our conversation. You may believe you have the wisdom of God at your disposal, sir, but rest assured, I believe the same. Only time will tell whose wisdom prevails, but I have the advantage. Only I know where Rowena is and I plan to keep it that way.”

When she realized her proximity, she pushed away from him, and watched, ready to help as he stood. “I also have the advantage of being able to awaken on the morrow without any aches and pains. But do not worry. I have an excellent tea should you require something to ease your soreness. And I’d be happy to make it for you.”

With that, she spun and marched into the hut, going straight through the small main room and into the tiny bedchamber.

Brindi bounced back onto the pallet and under the covers. “You should be asleep,” she told the girl sharply.

“You and Kenneth made a lot of noise. And I can’t sleep without you. You usually come to bed at the same time I do.”

“You were on your own for a month, Brindi.” But what she said was true when they were together. In Colchester, the days were busy, but the nights were quiet, each person still too concerned with staying out of the Norman soldiers’ ways. Sometimes, though, after Brindi had fallen asleep, Clara would slip out and visit Rowena. The trip into the woods was dangerous, but not too far. All she’d had to do was follow a small stream upward to its bend and step into the thicket a few feet. A small, man-made warren, probably used to hide a thief at one time, had been Rowena’s temporary home after the baby was born.

When Clara had discovered that she was to come to Little Dunmow, she’d moved Rowena to a hut she’d discovered, deep in the woods that skirted a small, nearly depleted peat bog. `Twas why Rowena was so reluctant to have a fire there, for sometimes a Saxon would pilfer the scraps of peat for fuel.

After that moment of silent thought, Brindi spoke. “Shouldn’t you pray for forgiveness for tripping Kenneth?”

“I did not trip him! A stray cat darted out of our garden and he slipped on the flagstones.”

“He could have died.”

Clara groaned. “No, he couldn’t have. People don’t die from falling, unless they are very old.”

“He could have hit his head and then died. You should have prayed for God to forgive you.”

“He didn’t die. He’s fine and `twas his slippery shoes on the wet stones that caused his fall, not me.”

“You made him jump up. You were arguing with him.”

“Like you are arguing with me?” Clara sighed. “I will pray, but sometimes we have to fight for what we believe in. And you shouldn’t have been listening at the door. Now go to sleep.”

Brindi didn’t answer. Shortly after, Kenneth entered and prepared the table to be his bed. Clara refused to surrender to her curiosity and peer through the hearth to see if he was limping. She’d find out in the morning if his fall had left any ill effects.

Still, Brindi was right about one thing. She should pray for forgiveness. For she surely had lost her temper with the man and hadn’t really felt sorry for his fall.

Lord, forgive me. Keep Rowena safe. Help me find the best place for her and the babe.

She huddled deeper into the bedclothes. But Kenneth’s occasional groans were too much for her curiosity. She twisted about and peered over the dying fire.

He was limping. And rubbing his head. Clara bit her lip. She should check him out. Her aunt had told her of one old man who’d fallen and cracked his head open, only to die in his sleep.

She should check his head and see if he had any broken bones.

She sat up, and Brindi opened her eyes.

“Get to sleep, Brindi.”

“Are you going to see if his brains are falling out?” the girl whispered.

“I’m sure his brains are fine. I will check him for broken bones. But if you don’t get to sleep right now, I will have you doing all the chores tomorrow.”

With that threat, Brindi flopped over on her side and fell silent. Clara pulled on her cyrtel and hastily tied up the belt and neck. Kenneth had already seen her hair, so her spare wimple wasn’t necessary. She shoved back the curtain and stepped into the light of the main room. “Let me see your head.”

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